Louisa Clack

I loved the introduction to this, with the song and the black figures. I cried when George dies in the book but this didnt actully make me feel sad. It ...

This made me smile, so thank you =) I like your sns of humour, you could make a book of mini stories of alternate fairy tales! Are the pigs prostitues? ...

I liked this, its really interesting Not sure hwre its going though and there are no senses of character or plot really. If you made it more into a poem ...

Awwh this is a sad song =( But still good =) What sorta style is it? Like it, but might b a bit mainstream, shake it up with some new ...

Whoa, this is really really good. Strugglinh to criticise you. I would pay money to read this, try and get pulished! Um, I think Leo needs to react to the ...

Hmm very good. I like the fact that this is from a bad guys point of viw, a nice change. However. I don't like the opening sentence, it can be ...

I'm afraid I only read up to part 2, but I will read the rest later. Really really good, liked this a lot. Be careful not to get too wrapped ...

Hi, really really liked this. I wrote a beginning chapter similar to this ags but nver developed on it. I like the action that you can dive straight into and ...

Hi there. This is a very mild story so far, quite light hearted for what I usually read. Hoever, I still enjoyed it. I think, in order to improve, you ...

I really liked this. I'm not really sure where its going but I quite like that fact. Be careful not to rush into things and try to us a littlemore ...